This is my version of Emily Dickinson's "Because I could not stop for death"
Because I could not stop for death
He kindly stopped for me
He offered his hand as I stepped in
A sound journey-his guarantee
He took the reins and on we went
With endless time to spare
I threw away each doubt and sigh
I tossed my every care
On the horizon first, a soaring dove
Its peace I did surely crave
Now on the right, a dying tree
Twas beautiful, but also grave
The horses galloped faster
As death cracked his flaming whip
I shivered as I caught the truth:
This was no welcome trip
Then suddenly, the wheels were still
A new figure appeared ahead
A powerful, bold stance had he
“This ends now,” he said
I leaped to the ground as quick I could
This bright man I could not deny
For his name was life and his home was earth
It was not my time to die
Great kyle! i have always liked the original and i lOVE your version! it's great
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